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Let us become one.....
I watch you in your cheeky six pack wrapper,
first you greet me with your dissolved malt'n'honey smile,
peering down at your army within trawling the depths of the bottle,
one by one you rise to the surface, who'd have known...
even bubbles need air, but there you go educating me again.
Your replenished pleasures take on an ocean of trust,
i've told you my most deep seeded thoughts...
yet you love me good time, long time...oohhhw..that's another story,
but you already know that tale... old friend.
And just when I think you can't get any more perfect,
you go and be both universal, and reasonably priced.
So the next time I open the fridge and give you that look,
I think Lionel said it best..."I just called to say I love you"




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On Saturday July 26th, 2008, saintedmad (1178) writes:
....you make me want to drink, when i dont. .. goodness


On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (428) writes:
*claps hands*..oh this is simply delightful! Very very clever!


On Monday April 7th, 2008, Alanarchy (1599) writes:
Beer is a dirty, filthy little whore. :)


On Monday April 7th, 2008, After hours (571) writes:
thanx for all the feed back, my brewski and I feel the love, cheers to all.


On Monday April 7th, 2008, elisa (2018) writes:
chemistry... at its best...... well.. second best;) excellent piece.


On Sunday April 6th, 2008, tangeled (526) writes:
genius. mmmm beer. i had a great laugh and realized it was all true as well. what a tribute, if i was beer, i'd be proud. ;) *cheers* to a brilliant tribute to mans best friend. drink responsibly kids. ~ta~


On Sunday April 6th, 2008, the-rapist (352) writes:
I'm thirsty already:) can I have another?


On Sunday April 6th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1821) writes:
Made me laugh. Good topic for a poem. *thumbs up*


On Sunday April 6th, 2008, NikesRain (1474) writes:
i don't think i'll ever look at beer the same again... although i think it has something to do with the way you've written it so well... nicely done piece


On Sunday April 6th, 2008, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
Haha..Sweet :) -Carl


On Sunday April 6th, 2008, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:
an old familiar companionship, trusted like a man's best friend, I can see the humour and truth in this.



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