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Violent Kiss

for my eternal beloved, pleasure pain it is...

Take me!
Please disarm me
And break me.
Cut and slash me
And leave me dead
Under the shadows.
Burn me
Under your blazing gaze
And kill me
After you kill my pride.
Wound me
And let me fester here,
Alone and raped
By your undying love.
Tell me
How much I need this pain;
Prove to me
How much you love me.
Beat me
Until I understand
The purpose of your violent kiss.

-march 25, 2003-

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On Thursday June 10th, 2004, ashrain (18) writes:

I love it! Its fits wonderfully with my mood these days. Wonderful write!Absolutly wonderful! ~ash

On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, Strabo (47) writes:

fascinatingly delicious. there are some great lines in here...and I want more ^_^

On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, Liz (401) writes:

Thought provoking: Is she abused and sarcastic or just masochistic?

On Sunday September 14th, 2003, Silent_Raven (23) writes:

i am a bit of both in this one- extremely sardonic, but it does give a sick satisfaction, to be so addicted to a lover (no, no physical abuse, they're just metaphors).

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, Six-Out (1798) writes:

Hmm...I wonder what this would look like carved into someone's back...no, that would be mean, but it's a good write nonetheless.

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, angelunderneath (76) writes:

scary and erotic at the same time... I like

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