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hello today, ready for another shameful day
sit with me, lets talk, what should we change
the cats are fighting again
i wouldnt seperate them

bring me back my flower
mabey i can be happy
please dont bring me weeds
i get no pleasure from the kids that creed

toda ive gone so far down
its a blessing that i havent drowned
open your arms again temptation
the reality of our complex situations so formal

this game, this game of chess we play
even though i sinned again ive lived another day



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On Tuesday January 15th, 2008, Wolfaerie (148) writes:
Apples, reminds me of sin ( thanks to genesis connotation, then again apple was never mentioned...anyway!) "the cats are fighting I wouldn't seperate them"- this is a crucial line to the poem, i love it. There are a few typos, but overall I love the title, the body and the ending. Lovely :)



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