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Bro/ken Tears

I just want to scream at the rain sometimes;
the kind of scream that starts in your toes,
then travels upward
through the spinal railroad
up through the deep caverns
of your chest-

then, with a slight shiver
comes the explosion;

an eruption of choir,
shattering the glass beads-
melting them before impact.

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On Monday December 27th, 2004, frozen (747) writes:

what I like most about you, is your ability to be real....I felt almost selfish reading this, as though I had tucked down on the shore and read from a more personal journal....but thats poetry right?

On Friday August 6th, 2004, knightmirror (424) writes:

short,sweet,and to the point.i won't even bother quoting anything from this one cause it's right there plain as day.very emotive piece.makes me want to try it next time it rains.****-knight

On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, slow.burn.star (99) writes:

mother fucking screamxcore

On Thursday September 11th, 2003, Strabo (47) writes:

great poem! with strong feeling

On Thursday September 11th, 2003, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

I simply LOVE this poem!

On Sunday August 17th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

quite beautiful and detailed

On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, wilted (303) writes:

very interesting....i really like it. i have never thought about screaming to the rain...but now, i think i will. heh. i like this a lot. _k

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:

this is awesome. this piece could be one of my favorites.

On Monday April 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

I agree with Mr.Ash It's deep!

On Monday February 3rd, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

love this piece ... always have .... always will ... thats why your never EVER going to delete it ... oops , i think i accidentaly bookmarked it ... what that means .. much respect

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