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All and weak by Chunky
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All and weak

~ Chunky ~

I am weak, nothing left.
Take my life, all these debts.
My sins be reformed.
take this soul please, its torn.

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  • snowdrop On Saturday, February 7, 2009, snowdrop (2145) wrote:

    Seperate, the lines don't attract me. But read as a whole, there's definitely something there...something special.


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