My Psalm

Please, God
this life is taking hold.
I don't need this anymore my friend.
This day is getting old.

So gray is this world of men
hearts black, rich with gold.
Only seeing vengeance in
their lust, no control.

they've taken everything from me.
now asking me to side.
they've taken nothing
for life is nothing, all i see are lies.

Please save me from this hell I'm in?
Please God Ive done my time.
Please save me from this torture within.
Please, I beg, don't hide.

I will always be a friend within
If only you wish to confide.
I will stand with a friend,Amen
Please, oh God its time.

• On Sunday, February 8, 2009, ColourGod (60) wrote:
  
  I have felt this many times, and in fact still do. I have committed myself to such a phenomenon. Life is crazy. It is important that we understand how crazy it can be. _Intime, Jordan.
  
  
• On Saturday, July 5, 2008, Chunky (50) wrote:
  
  heh... i didnt write awesome poem. i showed someone it and they commented it. just saying.
  
  
• On Saturday, July 5, 2008, Chunky (50) wrote:
  
  awesome poem
  
  
• On Saturday, June 7, 2008, ToxicLove (34) wrote:
  
  a plea for release... nice!
  
  
• On Friday, April 4, 2008, GraveFlower (295) wrote:
  
  i agree with tangled, im not into the whole faith thing, but this was good chunky man, for real,
  
  
• On Thursday, April 3, 2008, denver nitze (410) wrote:
  
  even though my belief is that they is no god. (or at least if there is he's playin one sick joke on me) but none the less i enjoyed this poem. nicely done. ~ta~
  
  
• A former member wrote: great write..
  
  
• A former member wrote: I know I'm ready to leave.....let me know if you find an 'acceptable' way out that would 'appear' like an accident...my attempts keep failing....(and here I thought I was good at everything) *sigh*
  
  
• On Thursday, March 13, 2008, Niemand (549) wrote:
  
  Ah, yes, it seems about time, eh?
  
  
• On Thursday, March 13, 2008, Chunky (50) wrote:
  
  for so long...
  
  
• On Wednesday, March 12, 2008, RubyXero (525) wrote:
  
  if i was god i'd grant ur wish. lol. let me know if he does. :P
  
  
• On Wednesday, March 12, 2008, Syringe (58) wrote:
  
  great write. enjoyed the rhyming scheme ^-^. but hang in there k? things will get better. jus try to think positive. it's so easy to sink into the negative pool. jus keep ur cool homie ;)