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Lost

lost in my own thoughts,
so many to list.
one minute i'm happy,
the next i'm pissed.

who do i tell?
it cannot be answered.
i wish i could control my thoughts,
i wish they could be mastered.

i am unable to express
the way i truly feel
or what i really think,
i don't know if i'm reallt real.

i want to be on top
of what my mind thinks
its easier said than done
because control slowly shrinks.

so much i must put up with
too much that can be said...
"get over it" my dad said...
"at least your not dead"

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On Thursday March 8th, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:

your dad's mean! but i loved, i can connect with uncontrolling thoughts.

On Tuesday January 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (33) writes:

Good advice Drifter. Your dad is wrong hun. "Get over it" is the worst thing you can say. Get BEYOND it... maybe. But setting it aside as if it never happened... uh uh. Anyway, great write. -Doll

On Tuesday January 27th, 2004, beginning_poet (11) writes:

thanks u guys, i appreciate the advice, but my dad has always been this way, he's an ass, but newayz, thanks a whole lot

On Tuesday January 27th, 2004, Drifter (355) writes:

what a horrible thing to say. **wants to smack your dad upside the head with a brick**... well, dont get over it, if you stop thinking you are dead. Just understand as best you can and remember.

On Tuesday January 27th, 2004, Petrified Wood (70) writes:

I completely feel you...the one thing we all must deal with is the fact that our thoughts cannot be controlled. When the thoughts are negative or angry, people have a hard time explaining how they truely feel b/c "normal" people don't understand

On Tuesday January 27th, 2004, Petrified Wood (70) writes:

why we would have these thoughts to begin with. Great job of putting on paper (sort of)...**jwd**

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