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"The Falling of Serenity" by Fantecstasy

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The artist called it war,
And the poet, a silence
It could have been so much more.
Colourless, talentless too-
All that we abhor.
Strangle held, earth bound,
As that which tragedy wore,
The ruin and the writing,
On the dark unsightly sighting,
By the painting of a heaven,
Which we did long adore,
As every little creature,
Of contemptible size,
Sought every single feature,
Another might prize,
To tiny demon dynasties,
We now solemnly depart,
With vengeance on our breath,
On our brushes, pens and heart.



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On Saturday June 7th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
Masterly worded


On Friday May 23rd, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (701) writes:
Glad you got at least one poem written while I was gone buddy. Perfect as always, I love your utter defiance of rhyme scheme in some of your work, it's all over and yet it flows perfectly, and as always is great to speak aloud. As for the topic, brilliant, and the last line wrapped it up quite nicely. Write on *salutes*


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, Nill (165) writes:
honestly surprised. Why surprised? Well I was just clicking and I found my way here. "painting heaven", implies we fantasize paradise with simply a brushstroke, elysium is our imagination.


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, Narcissa (727) writes:
A stunning and classic piece.


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, An Expired Member (22) writes:
I really love the last to lines...this piece was awesome man. Thanks!!


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, Lipstick Whore (502) writes:
This is stunning.


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, deadrosesrdust (128) writes:
ur perspective on this topic is grand. i honestly like it a lot. im not that great at leaving comments so i hope this one pleases u .



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