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Uncork your conscience
Pour out your thoughts
I'm holding my glass
Slender fingers would do better
But we can pretend once more
Don't spill a drop of your soul
Talk to me now
I'm drinking you in
Your hopes are splendid
Your desires intoxicating
With an after taste of tears
Now you're bleeding the bottle
I'm drunk off your sadness
One sip more perhaps
It's a taste so fine
Don't kill yourself now
We've still yet more wine


© 2007 Fantecstasy

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On Tuesday May 27th, 2008, Miss Mars (387) writes:
this is pretty amazing. just captivating really. i love the imagery here. :D -mars


On Tuesday January 1st, 2008, An Expired Member (50) writes:
captivating. it was amazing.. nice write. a good visual too. -mars


On Friday November 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:
Dude this is such a good write, it caught me right at the 1st line. Hugz!


On Thursday October 25th, 2007, Preacher X (60) writes:
Wow. As Rhys Ki said, amazing metaphors, EXTREMELY creative form and yet deeply connecting. I think everyone has been on one side or the other of this equation. The ending has an almost taunting feel to it. As if the unseen speaker is laughing at the subject person.


On Monday October 15th, 2007, Rhys Ki (105) writes:
I love the metaphors! And it's so interesting, almost a suicidal parody. Kinda deep, very nice. Welcome to Dp!


On Thursday October 11th, 2007, TheProphetUntold (346) writes:
Interesting, better of the two you have so far. Again theres still of a lot of potential to be tapped into here. I look forward to more. +tpu+


On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:
lovely write...cheers! :)


On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, happilydepressed (215) writes:
good write, hope to see more


On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, anakronistik_me (42) writes:
there's something about it...not really sure how to explain it. not even sure of what it means to me. but it creates a sense of familiarity within. great write. keep goin!


On Wednesday October 10th, 2007, carlosjackal (1615) writes:
What a unique view this is, and fabulously expressed. -Carl



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