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rediculous relationships

though you were my fortune
you were inside me and yet
you have broken me into a million pieces
letting my juices stain your skin

i grip your clothes too tightly
you brush me off like lint
maybe its time for a change

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On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:

"letting my juices stain your skin", this was a beautiful line. -kitty

On Sunday June 26th, 2005, dusty (35) writes:

"You brush me of like lint/Maybe it's time for a change". Very powerful lines, although perhaps only to those who can relate... it's easier to judge from the sidelines. Very beautiful.

On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, Lotophagi (459) writes:

and the last line just stabs through me as truth..... thank you.

On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

"... you were inside me and yet" ... the short break there, is a masters work, in the way the meaning hit the reader. I think this poem one of the best of the many I have read on this site on love, by far. And far from simple. -Nadir-

On Tuesday August 24th, 2004, capt_funguy (1006) writes:

oh man ... i thank you for writing this , and i thank nadir for bringing this piece to the surface , with her comment ... this is so soft blunt , it's remarkable ... funguy

On Tuesday August 24th, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

At times I go days without finding a poem like this, and searching for it. This is why I keep searching, this is what makes my hands shake when I leave a comment. This is what makes me feel like I am choking writing you this.

On Tuesday August 24th, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

The title is not liked by me however, but the poem is devine. In a few lines it got what few can obtain. It is classic, while still being totaly unique. Full admiration. -Nadir-

On Sunday May 11th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (348) writes:

My god... do I know how you feel... You expressed the feeling SO well. Excellent poem.

On Sunday February 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (10) writes:

very nice poem, i like how you express the feeling of a person forgetting you -PoP RoXx n KoKe-

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