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The rubble where my lover lay
the corpses pile to the sky
beside this grave forever stays
tears for every inch and mile.

In the chaos of that dawn
the towers that we did love so
have fallen from there place above
and crushed those who meandered below.

The auburn sun may cease to rise
and dance upon steels broken face
the final song, sweet swan take flight
I seek but find deaths cold embrace.

And so I climb through seas of dust
to find the place where I shall stay
beside his body, his hand I hold
the rubble where my lover lay.



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On Sunday September 9th, 2007, Nadir (630) writes:
Hope to see more of you, these poems I read hold a great promise.


On Wednesday September 5th, 2007, Reefer_rave (228) writes:
is at a loss for words that don't seem overly cliche


On Monday August 27th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (343) writes:
Hauntingly beautiful. I love the flow of this. It really evokes strong images that stay with the reader long after he/she's finished. Well-done.


On Sunday August 26th, 2007, Narcissa (719) writes:
I agree with winterwords - pics of 9/11 fill my head. The image you create is beautiful though.


On Saturday August 25th, 2007, ArtemisticSin (27) writes:
So beautifully sad


On Friday August 24th, 2007, Tania (307) writes:
this is lovely.. soft with a delicate rhyme.. lots of beautiful lines too.. perfect.. almost heartbreaking.


On Friday August 24th, 2007, Alanarchy (1599) writes:
Tolkien, or Jordan-esque. Just outright beautiful.


On Friday August 24th, 2007, The Crimson Queen (1245) writes:
Tragic and beautiful. Your imagery painted the scene in front of my eyes, and I was consumed by it's breathtaking beauty. Wonderful.


On Friday August 24th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
i like the differenciation of the end syllables... it shows time and patience when piecing together a rhyme scheme. bravo


On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, An Expired Member (15) writes:
i love it!so beautifully written...and yet so sad..


On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
God. I love that you started and ended with the same line, it really brought your words together. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, how the imagery seems to flow from every syllable. Excellent. ~*Beth*~


On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, Winterwords (19) writes:
Achingly beautiful...timeless. Still, it whispers to me of 9/11...hauntingly


On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, Shm Ecl (7) writes:
I loved it. It's sad but romantic too.


On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, James_the_Saint (131) writes:
I love this scene. It's so romantic, (In it's way.)



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