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"Boy of Ash and Cigarettes." by Kurashu

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She said my flesh was ash
And my tongue composed of cigarette butts.
Breathe like a toxic plume.

I killed her slowly;
although, she loved every second.

Mein schoen Maedchen.
Until one day when she stopped.
Her lungs blacker than night.
The north star lost beyond recognition.

That night I died inside
(And fell into the ash tray among my brothers)




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On Wednesday December 19th, 2007, Distorted_Reality (151) writes:
This is really genius. It reminds me of something I wrote a while ago (minus the german) but written out way better than I had attempted. Awesome!


On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, wonderlandhysteria (2184) writes:
This is gorgeous. It made me want to inhale the poem. I love you. xoxox


On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, Trigger (131) writes:
I really enjoyed this, both as a writer and a smoker, but why is "my beautiful girl" auf Deutsch?


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Kurashu (36) writes:
I felt like adding a little bit of German to my poem. It's been a while since I've done anything with German. Well, I did write half a letter to Kriste auf Deutsch a little while ago...


On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, serotonin lost (222) writes:
this has made me want to quit smoking but at the same time be a cigarette. I'm in love with this in a way that almost feels dirty



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