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Her cloak was tattered torn
She’d worn well and rough
Each blemish: a different story.
A library on her back.
We sat and she told each one
And I listened faithfully.

Then, while she rested peacefully,
My busy hand went to work.
Not a single wound could I fix.
Ashamed, dejected, I snuck back
And hung her cloak on the chair it called bed.

That morning she told me another story
One of how a tailor tried to fix a cloak,
A cloak as worn as hers, and failed.
How not every ragged cloak should be fixed,
That every blemish is a reminder of another story.

I never told her.
But she knew.
She’d always known.
That old cloak still hangs round her neck
With a new stain on the hood.




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On Monday January 7th, 2008, Unforgotten (164) writes:
A good story and a good meaning. This is written so personaly that I feel I am the tailor... and that its not just this once but that I've tried many times to mend things with no success, regretting my failing


On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
This is kind of eerie to me. I dunno why. But I like it in ways I can't explain. It just has a strange aura. Kind of like quicksand on the tongue.


On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, Narcissa (724) writes:
wonderful ...


On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, Bridge (347) writes:
hmm...i like this.



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