You seem to have touched a lot of people with this. Thank you for it.

When one compliments the other this is what you get...synchronized love...beautiful

... couldn't have said it better myself.

simple... and so lovely....~RAIN~

I almost sense a double edge to this near light-hearted hope? *teach me to dance* jerk my strings... but in saying that, I won't say that my mind is in the proper light for the reading of such a write. I choose to see the hope... I choose... choose.

I am so enamored with this. It's anything but lacking "wonder". In fact, it's wonder in its purest form. Gorgeous. And that first stanza is so flawlessly conveyed...if being awake is this lovely, I pray to God that I will never sleep again. (Unfortunately, being awake is never so beautiful in my world, as in yours.)

i lvoe the space [visual and implied] surrounding the 'somewhere'. . . .a most excellent use of aesthetics. ..

beautiful.

reading it again it makes me cry a little. somethings just dont pan out like we wants em to, do they?

No Moonie they don't but sometimes you can only stay under a rock for so long...even though I frequent that rock a lot.

I'm the shadow under the rock... any daring enough to look under will only see me flee.

aye, my back must be made of shale, so brittle and bony. i wonder who hides beneath me........dont want to crush the little sport.

Excellent as always, and it caught me in a mood where it just seemed to hit home, regardless of circumstance. And a title that speaks to me, are my eyes even open anymore? write on...

*goes to that place* sounds so forgotten and yet remembered. *huggles*