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Bath Water

Curled up in your current
Intoxicating strokes move me
Your scent lingers
Leaving no regrets...

Shallow lover
How deep
Must I sink
Into you
To drown out

His memory?

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On Wednesday June 18th, 2008, DIATRICUS (86) writes:

this one is lovely...

On Tuesday June 3rd, 2008, Aleas (247) writes:

Amazing write. This place is bottomless. Both a blessing in that this body of water is endless to swim, but once we're forced under, we'll never get back to the surface.

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

Ending did not fit the rest in my oppinion, but I'll kill for beeing the one saying your scent lingers leaving no regrets. Top dollar write

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Mab (972) writes:

drown the memory..purify it with steam..and then pull the plug and let him slip down the drain :) I really do love this!

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, After hours (637) writes:

Your such a treat, and have a knack of delivering on cue, you've given my melancholy company for the night.

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, An Expired Member (21) writes:

I absolutely love your style of writing - another amazing meaningful write in the space of a handful of words.

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Sketso (621) writes:

...pulls the plug and listens to the gurgle of the drain.

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Jonas (877) writes:

this captured, for me, a small slice of reality that most are likely familiar with... left a wry smile on my lips.

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:

extremely awesome miss -symph-

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (693) writes:

Strong words here, I like the piece but the message makes me want to hug you...

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:

*beats caddy to the hug*

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Narcissa (724) writes:

Hugs the both of you...

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Lipstick Whore (498) writes:

OOOOO...shivers, the good kind and the bad kind...this is pretty awesome,,,*faves*

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Ms Moon (616) writes:

this is perfect. makes me want to climb in a bathtub and sink belw the suds forever. love it. great write yet again.

On Monday June 2nd, 2008, Zen (602) writes:

or him into you. either way, this is probably something everyone knows a little about. sometimes it's hard to forget, and then we realize, that we don't really want to.

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