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She placed blue bonnets in excess
Ignoring the bones beneath her dress
My site too grave for the dead
She placed a vase above my head

Over a hundred years of being alone
and no one has ever visited my stone
A vision of youth. My garden she graced
My haunting cemetery had been replaced

Spilling her hair across the weeds
She lays by my side and softly she reads
She brushes off the dirt to reveal my name
Wishing hers and mine to be the same

For she speaks of life when shes with me
"The years alive are pale to eternity"
Time crept like ivy on the gate
But she knew to hold on to fate...

The blue bonnets lined the hall
Dancing as lovers at a ball
A wedding waltz played
Forever embraced they stayed


To Thomas 1875-1900
Time may cage our souls
But love will set us free




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On Saturday August 9th, 2008, warmaprylrain (189) writes:
simply lovely write~rain


On Friday April 4th, 2008, manicheism (51) writes:
This is beautiful.


On Saturday March 22nd, 2008, Sketso (529) writes:
;) Quite a nice touch you have.


On Thursday March 20th, 2008, BeforeIGiveUpMoon (564) writes:
*speechless* well, im dreaming of this tonight, such pleasant dreams they will be ^_^


On Wednesday March 19th, 2008, Bridge (336) writes:
wow..that was awesome. really. i don't know what else to say.


On Wednesday March 19th, 2008, heartdripsblack (770) writes:
aww such a powerful piece from you. amazing as always. ~ hdb.


On Wednesday March 19th, 2008, mysterylove (80) writes:
woww.. just wow


On Wednesday March 19th, 2008, Ainsof (1838) writes:
sentiments like the last scenes from Titanic, that's what this gave me. A tale of everlasting love, of humanity conquering mortality... divine love is eternal and this structured verse captures something of the mournful but triumphant love beyond death.


On Tuesday March 18th, 2008, NikesRain (1420) writes:
lovely and forlorn visuals creating a perfect mood in this... capturing write


On Tuesday March 18th, 2008, tangeled (502) writes:
wow. i'm speechless. very nice write. ~tÅ~


On Tuesday March 18th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (507) writes:
Absolutely stunning Narcissa... This image won't leave my head for quite some time. The rhyme scheme in no way inhibited your ability to paint the beautiful scene or express the story. I love this piece, well written *salutes*



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