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"Tossing Wishes" by Narcissa

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Tonights a night for lovers...
Where stars skate across midnight
And the moon casts candle lit romance

Tonights a night for lovers...
An upside down wishing well
Partners holding hands stroll by
Tossing wishes like prayers into the heavens

I bite my lip
so i can't call out your name

Incase wishes ever did come true....

you deserve so much better



© 2008 Narcissa

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On Thursday March 13th, 2008, Sketso (491) writes:
You painted a heart warming picture, then shattered it with the shadow of one watching... quite a nice effect.


On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, Ainsof (1729) writes:
this is sooooooo shweet... soft, tender words.. I felt as if I held the moon fully in the midst of a july night, soaring on its splendor.... basking within its embrace... the world below so minuscule, so trite... as if I could laugh and it'd blow away... then I looked back at the moon, and I saw it was you.


On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, Narcissa (724) writes:
More poetry in the comment box??? I love it. Thank you.


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, Tinuviel (73) writes:
I like the repeating line and flow of this poem. ^_^


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (377) writes:
Wow Narcissa, two in positive in a row. I love this poem... Elegant and beautiful. Made my night


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, Geisha (806) writes:
*tosses* Very relatable


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, wilted (273) writes:
I enjoyed the sudden shift in mood. Lovely wording, as well. Simple, beautiful, and really, really nice.


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, tangeled (556) writes:
all too relatable. very nice. from start to finish. ~tÅ


On Wednesday March 12th, 2008, Ainsof (1729) writes:
TnA



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