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"I Don't Understand Poetry" by Narcissa

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There's a light in the flower shop tonight
Lovers gathering bouquets of promises
And stems of love letters that only flowers can write
I stood outside as the snow fell...
Like plucked down from an infant bird
The wind tried to pitch me from its icy glove
Into oncoming traffic of pedestrians
I should have obeyed its command
But I was hypnotized by the patch of life
That thrived inside the floral boutique
You gathered a cocktail of roses
And the passion in your eyes captivated me
I watched you
Thinking how it would be if we were children
Id be adored in a floral dress and clipped daisies in my hair
And you'd be dressed in a suit of pale blue
Stealing easter eggs out of my basket
And pulling on my Shirley Temple curls to get my attention
But you didn't know me
Not really...
Strangers werent we?
Those flowers are for your sweetheart. Not me.
Yet when you sniffed the flowers you caught my gaze
And It was as if you were breathing my scent for the first time
I felt your face touch the base of my neck
My fingers felt warm
As if we were holding hands like old lovers
But without ever touching
Your lips moved
I could hear your words
Though your voice was muted by a closed door
That read 'open late for Valentines day'
Scared I ran home
Ran away from a complete stranger
Or were you?

 ...That evening....
I remember telling him not to send me flowers
because it was too painful to watch them wither
so he sent trinkets and cards with Hallmark greetings
and I wrote him poems
Until he told me
"I dont understand poetry"





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On Tuesday February 19th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (583) writes:
wonderful darling, this indeed made my heart skip a beat, a perfect lace of love softly touching reality, excellent -symph-


On Thursday February 14th, 2008, serotonin lost (239) writes:
i'm speachless. i'm usually not the kind for this style of poetry but this held my attention so well. thankyou


On Sunday February 10th, 2008, blue (1740) writes:
I certainly enjoyed this poem, though, it would have read better with punctuation. A fine showing none the less. ~b


On Sunday February 10th, 2008, Sketso (534) writes:
... there's an never-ending sense of being... trapped (?) throughout this whole write, on both sides of the flower shop door. A lingering wondering of what if... that leaves one feeling dissatisfied. And a big YARRR! for you and clipped daisies... ;)


On Sunday February 10th, 2008, Efamilia (36) writes:
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! This has just opened up a whole new level of appriciation for poetry. Beautiful and remarkable - damn, how can one piece be so peferct! :)


On Sunday February 10th, 2008, Narcissa (681) writes:
Thank you. *Blushes*


On Saturday February 9th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
nice narrative flow....bit unadventerous, but there go again expecting every damn soul to write exclusively for ME...excuse me. Courtesouly and light, this poem speaks of the common emotion we understand (or mostly don't) as love....in a way it reminded me of the film Frankie and Johnny, and I'm not sure that's a compliment or a fingers in the throat job, but either way there were moments I enjoyed this delicate affair...there ya go...


On Saturday February 9th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (500) writes:
Hmmm a nice deep write, hit the spot for me right now. *salutes*



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