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Elysian Phantom

Elysian Phantom
Your pierced tounge
drips tequila
      '
      '
      '
into necrotic wounds
a black maze of dispair
craddle of words now wasted
my muse burried in his own ink
tattooed suicide notes
demon artists decorated my mirage
in scribbles and scars devouring my core
passion erased in permanant black
has rendered me expressionless
a pantomime amputee
Illusion lost
be forewarned
nothing more is coming

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On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Circe Avalon (183) writes:

This is way dark..and your worried about me? No it is an awesome poem. thanx!

On Tuesday November 6th, 2007, blue (1784) writes:

ouch. an incisive bleeding. "pantomime amputee" yikes, the end lines gave me a shiver. ~b

On Tuesday November 6th, 2007, Alanarchy (1611) writes:

So evanescent and fleeting. But chilling, for some reason. Title really hooked me in, and the ride was worth it. Write on.

On Tuesday November 6th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

oh the passion and intensity. So lovely.

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