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Once Invincible

Once invincible
Your strength now faltered
The great oak leafless
Lifeless
Bare by weathered time
Your arms now weak
Atlas grew tired
Limp
My world now fallen
Your words now soundless
Static clouds the connection
Lost
You can't hear me either
Our love was a treasure
You lost at sea
Missing
No map marked destination
With no attempt to look
I'm right here
Alone

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On Wednesday January 23rd, 2008, Sketso (515) writes:

Wow... I can almost hear your voice whispering the words as my mind's eye watches you write... then let the wind carry the work away. Nice.

On Sunday August 19th, 2007, NikesRain (1505) writes:

so breaking in whispered tones, it grips the heart and touches deeply... well done

On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (21) writes:

That drew a tear, it really spoke to me. As usual, just lovely!

On Sunday August 12th, 2007, Mylissa (1122) writes:

sad and beautifully written.

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