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Spring

Spring

She slept thru winter
than awoke with a vengenance
She bellowed the thunder
and wept many tears
For her fading beauty
She cried for days
Untill she felt pure disgust
She beckoned fire and the winds
to teach a lesson
Then She ignored us
We suffered a silent drought
She wakes earlier every year
With hopes for a sign of new life
Her resentment is the only growth

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On Friday June 27th, 2008, Ainsof (1747) writes:

"whipped her and beat her tied her with fences and dragged her down" but her resentment, growing as it may, turns its wounds towards the sky and she opens herself again... and again... waiting for us to free her, to redeem ourselves in her offering, to offer her some redemption... captivating.

On Wednesday March 26th, 2008, Mab (1052) writes:

hmm....*scratches head* I thought I had commented already.this is beauty personified and the last line is the perfect ending.

On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Wow... I NEVER will feel the same in spring again...

On Friday September 14th, 2007, Err0r (581) writes:

Interesting perspective. Sounds like a bear with a grizzly attitude. Impressive write. Ended sharply and that was a plus. =)

On Tuesday August 21st, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:

Nature and poetry are a beautiful combination...so lovely you are.

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:

beautiful writing

On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (18) writes:

Beautiful, I love this!!

On Sunday August 5th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1850) writes:

Lovely. i loved the beginning awoke with avengance. I't does seem like that when she awakes. Wellcome to DP

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