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Pain was his best Joy...

Know yourself a monster?,
IF monsters all you see?,
If home the heart of soul,
A monster you shall be,

Never know if hug or strike,
Lightning just as quick,
Monster wore a human face,
Excuses always slick,

"You know how hard he works",
"He doesn't mean to boy",
I knew well his smile,
That Pain was his best Joy,

Hell is just a tunnel,
Heaven point-of-light,
IF you have survived,
You have won your fight...

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On Wednesday December 26th, 2007, italianbella (296) writes:

great write:)

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, gigantopithecusragno (23) writes:

The words are not 100% accurate... Convincing yourself that you have value and worth as a punching-bag for the breadwinner, because-as livestock-your needs are provided for...I tend to wax sarcastic...Thanks, Jon...

On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

swift and intelligent............your words have a quick and decisive echo..........well done

On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Solace (1424) writes:

Particularly brilliant, the first two stanzas, "he doesn't mean to, boy" perhaps would suit the pause more. Not sure the sentiment finale agrees with me, but this is still an impressive piece of literature

On Tuesday August 14th, 2007, gigantopithecusragno (23) writes:

Thanks Halo...

On Thursday August 9th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

Giants at the circus party

On Saturday August 4th, 2007, gigantopithecusragno (23) writes:

The past you cannot change, Knots help you cling to rope, No matter WHAT they do, Own your futures' hope... ~Thanks sIo

On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, sIo (891) writes:

i can't put my hand on...a finger doesn't give justice to the awesomitity of this...but this is well done, ol' chap. well done.

On Monday July 30th, 2007, gigantopithecusragno (23) writes:

Thanks, I'd like to...spidermonkey...

On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:

Sounds to me like you should post more. Wellcome to DP

On Sunday July 29th, 2007, gigantopithecusragno (23) writes:

Thanks very much Drea and Mab, No one can control their start, but we can all shape our future...your friend, spidermonkey...

On Saturday July 28th, 2007, Mab (1021) writes:

this flowed so smoothly.very dark,and I loved the title :)

On Saturday July 28th, 2007, Drea (934) writes:

interesting indeed. Welcome.

On Friday July 27th, 2007, gigantopithecusragno (23) writes:

Thank You Symph, it is an honor to be of service GR aka spidermonkey...

On Thursday July 26th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (641) writes:

nicely done friend, i can see glimpses of truth and hope and damnation all rolled into one, i enjoyed it...welcome to DP :) -symph-

On Thursday July 26th, 2007, gigantopithecusragno (23) writes:

Thanks Mylissa and Alanarchy...glad you liked it...GR[ie.spidermonkey]

On Wednesday July 25th, 2007, Mylissa (1085) writes:

very interesting...welcome.

On Wednesday July 25th, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:

If we ever make it out alive. Interesting write.

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