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Oh how I yearn to touch you knowing how it would feel if
 
I just touched it if I dragged my nails against you
how sweet it would feel how I would yearn for more
yet know how much I will pay for it later.
Yet I continue to run my nails against the now red flesh
where you had bit me and taken what you wanted from me and
left me with this desire burning within me.

All I need to do was touch the spot where
you left a reminder of your presence in my life.
And all the memories will come flooding back to me.
Urging me onwards to fulfill this desire burning within.
Then I give in I begin to rub it hoping the feeling will go away but
it just makes it worse it makes me want to
just rip that piece of skin off so I wouldn’t feel
the increscent desire any more.
This desire which will remain unfilled……..








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On Monday February 25th, 2008, carlosjackal (1724) writes:
True human nature wrought so bloody well. -Carl


On Thursday December 27th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:
Loved this one! Nice mix of humour and imagery. Ciao, T/S


On Monday December 10th, 2007, raskal (215) writes:
Lol...bastard mozzies!!


On Friday October 19th, 2007, Trigger (123) writes:
I like the inspiration. Fun read.


On Monday October 15th, 2007, Kui (703) writes:
Never thought such a thing was possible... Nice write.-Airi


On Sunday July 22nd, 2007, Winter Born (160) writes:
An almost masochistic desire for self control. I love mosquito bites. Very well written, and it has a good beat.


On Saturday July 21st, 2007, snow (15) writes:
thanks for all your coments i'll c if i can come up wit some thing else. yet inspiration fades too quickly


On Friday July 20th, 2007, Err0r (564) writes:
Hahaha. :D This is very clever. I enjoyed this write to the fullest. Also, you made me itchy. =P Thanks.


On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
funny, nice read.


On Monday July 16th, 2007, darkdesires (173) writes:
great piece I love how its just perfect... gives you just enough detail, length, passion, ugh... great job.



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