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"Chatham Poem no1 (Why baths are far superior to showers)" by Petra Creffield

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Chatham Poem no1

Why baths are far superior to showers...

In a bath you take the time to clean between your toes
In a shower everything is rushed and quick

In bath one can linger, sipping at a glass, with the radio for company
In a shower you have to sing too loud

In a bath your fingers and toes go all wrinkly
In a shower the routine is always the same

In a bath with a lover, languid conversation and sensuality ensues
In a shower with a lover, its usually all over way too fast

In a bath you let go of your day
Unwind your thoughts
Stroke your own skin
Breathe under bubbles
Until you hear the sea

©Petra Creffield 2006



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On Friday August 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1718) writes:
"Until you hear the sea"..love the ending. Baths on an evening after a tiring day at work are amazing :) -Carl


On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Petra Creffield (38) writes:
indeed they are, this one was inspired by the first bath i had had for 18 months after living in a flat with only a shower, was lovely :) Px


On Wednesday August 1st, 2007, saintedmad (1148) writes:
mmmmmm....languid is right. . .a luxe poem with a beautifully rendered picturesque drawing/photo;; love the blues that add hues to the imagery of words. ..



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