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Why Would You Want Me?

Why would you want me?
Who would I ask?
Want this emotional car wreck,
That I can now see.

With my neurotic fears,
And endless self-pitying tears.
Addictions by the truck-load,
And no real enlightenment in years.

Leave it all behind.
I would too, if only I could.
It is easier to walk away,
Than to love this and stay.

I overreact making big dramas,
I’m jealous and mean.
And afraid to be seen.
In case you will see and leave.

Then you did anyway.
And all I can say,
Is, I understand why,
You could no longer try.

To climb my mountains of defence.
Hold my depressive countenance.
To keep telling me everything will be alright.
As you hold me through the night.

Just give it up and walk away
It really will be easier that way
I won’t be sad, instead just glad
That one of us got away.


Petra Creffield 2004



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On Sunday August 19th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (333) writes:
I absolutely, 100% know how you feel. Insecurity can be a really destructive force, and the people we tend to encounter are often just as destructive. This piece is brilliantly-expressed.


On Saturday August 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (5) writes:
This is really good. Speaks to me. ^ ^


On Saturday August 11th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
You've added a piccie! Works brilliantly with the poem. Nice! -Carl


On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Petra Creffield (38) writes:
Thanks - glad you likeee :)


On Friday August 3rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1106) writes:
now this is the complexity i love to see. well done. well well done.


On Sunday July 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
Fantastically honest and spot on write. Often is the case we cry, "Oh, why oh why will no one love me for who I am?" without first looking at major faults we do nothing about but instead let them fester. Top stuff.


On Sunday July 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
142? 150! That's only 4 doors..Coolio =) -Carl



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