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"Beauty in disorder" by Rebell tiGer King

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There was something about her
that day.

Maybe it was that wrinkle in her dress,
Right above the thighs.

Maybe it was the sweat smudging her eye liner,
the left eye to be exact.

Or perhaps it was the stain on her blouse,
she had a hot dog for lunch.

Or it could've been her hair tangled,
it was very windy that day.

I don't know what it was,
She looked like hell.

But she damn sure stole my heart.



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On Friday July 4th, 2008, Narcissa (723) writes:
Now thats what I call love. :)


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, carlosjackal (1725) writes:
This was spot-on brilliant :) Nice one, Bro =)


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, Lipstick Whore (499) writes:
Okay--where exactly do we find guys like you? This is a lovely tribute to honest to god love...nicely done!


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:
well see thats the thing, there's only one me :D -symph-


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, After hours (636) writes:
That's about as real as it gets, no lipstick or rouge required...just honest to god love.


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:
Reminds me of Delight in Disorder... now was that by Herrick, I think so... sometimes I confuse Herrick with Herbert though the latter was metaphysical and the former cavalier... not much in common besides the 'H's. Just think of all the disappointed souls who think beauty resides only in perfection... how they must pine for the pristine. be well!


On Friday July 4th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:
Yes sir Ainsof, inspired by Delight in Disorder, fueled by my muse of course in many a ways, -symph-


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, Nymphet Mars (537) writes:
i agree with Reset. cute write Tigre. :D -mars


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, Skarlet Rebell Queen (192) writes:
finding perfection in imperfections.. not many can see that.. and i know your eye sight very well..:D this is lovely.


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, elisa (1992) writes:
you certainly set the bar very very high.


On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, Please Press Reset (198) writes:
awwh tiger thats cute.



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