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If love could.....

If love could speak what would it say?
Would it tell stories of wounded suits and taylored hearts...

If love could speak what would it say?
Would it cry in joy or laugh in pain.

If love could be seen what would we see?
Would it give shade in the night or shine its stars during day.

If love could play what would it do?
Would it hide in tomorrows moon or seek in yesterdays sun.

If love was me......
would i pretend to care?

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On Saturday September 1st, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (142) writes:

This was beautiful and the ending was awesome.

On Tuesday August 28th, 2007, Rhys Ki (124) writes:

it sounds so lovely and pure. like love would be described by a child. innocent and beautiful... Love ya Aldo!

On Sunday August 26th, 2007, Loketha Angel (152) writes:

I read this several times, both drawn to tears and to curiosity. Each line was so pure and vivid, but it also asked serious questions.

On Sunday August 26th, 2007, Loketha Angel (152) writes:

Love is something not everyone is available to play, but at the same time, your final line was something that was seriously heartfelt. Your words struck me so hard that I was glad to be sitting before reading, for I would have been knocked off my feet.

On Sunday August 26th, 2007, Loketha Angel (152) writes:

You have a beautiful way of expressing your feelings and I thank you for being so creative and sharing this piece with everyone. ~Angel

On Saturday August 25th, 2007, An Expired Member (4) writes:

i would care but not pretend to care about luv =D

On Saturday August 25th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (192) writes:

haha... that's right. :D so symph here is just pretending. lol.. nah, he does care..that, i know..;p

On Saturday August 25th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:

i would :D -symph-

On Saturday August 25th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (192) writes:

hmm... would you? :P

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