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"Rather it Were Raining" by Scarecrow Jack

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Alone
with my thoughts, sleep
fled blind, sand through bony fingers
of the clock
tick tock
on the wall

Drear eyed mirror face
watching
wonders who the man is behind
curtains drawn tight
wind groans past brick windows
the coffee's gone cold

Matches lost, fumbling
candle lusts for flame
I know I left that
Yellow Brick Road here
somewhere, looking for cigarette
remember that I don't smoke

Slipping
on the ice behind my eyes
I wake up, stiff
in my chair, ghost taste of
candle smoke sun in my eyes

I pull the curtains closed

 



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On Wednesday June 20th, 2007, Army Barbie (499) writes:
Holy f'n hell. "I know I left that/ Yellow Brick Road here/ somewhere, looking for a cigarette" Kick assery.


On Thursday June 14th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
nice succinct bites at loneliness and the nature of its human cause


On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
Such a glaring stream of concience. what can I say that other's haven't already covered. Great great work, and welcome. I'll be reading :D


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Nuri (192) writes:
A moment captured with such sublime, simple words. I can only echo. Intense intense. Chilly warm. Haunting. Lonely. Welcome, Scarecrow Jack.


On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Scarecrow Jack (45) writes:
Thank you, all, for the kind comments and warm welcomes.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, evolve (2228) writes:
Well-felt. Well spat. I can't begin to tell you how this echoed in my bones. Welcome to DarkPoetry.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (452) writes:
wonderful :)


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
the last stanza hooked me, bravo


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, An Expired Member (5) writes:
I agree with raskal, the intensity in this was tremendous. I love the way you cut out the lines; it really gives a feeling of silence and loneliness.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, raskal (198) writes:
'I woke up stiff in my chair, ghost taste of candle smoke sun in my eyes' -I enjoyed this, choice of words and the intensity -has a real sense of loneliness, which i completely felt -:)



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