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Lullaby Disconnect

Storm winds
Remember
Girl faces laughing
Silvered in falling
Rain

Untidy
Funeral home
Recollection
Black suited file
By

Bye

Dusty bottles of
Streetlight memory
Set for two
One glass
Empty

3 a.m. phone
Calls
Heartbeat
Busy Signal
Click

Dial tone

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On Saturday September 29th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Its so short yet powerful and very abstract because of the writing style. Thanx, it was great to read...

On Friday August 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1647) writes:

This is so vivid and alive, short, punchy and loaded. Brilliant. -Carl

On Tuesday August 14th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:

good fucking god man, where did you come from? i need to visit and learn how to write, you kick major ass

On Tuesday August 14th, 2007, Scarecrow Jack (45) writes:

I'm from the boonies. Patron State of Shooting Stuff.

On Sunday August 12th, 2007, Mylissa (1090) writes:

Left with a ache for more...lovely.

On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, unspeakable truth (149) writes:

Hauntingly reminiscent... I love how this played through, and that it left a lot to the imagination.

On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, Alanarchy (1616) writes:

...Like a serial killer trying to bring up bits and pieces of memories of when he wasn't jaded.

On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, saintedmad (1156) writes:

i think the title says it for me; it was a softsung lullaby for something truly missed; deeply remembered; softly inhaled as realness...... you do ahve such a quieting effect--- [that ending was so abrupt....*dangs] nessa

On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (356) writes:

I have two distinct diverging images on the meaning behind this piece. One being a loved one passed or the loved one lost... intriguing images... ~T

On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, Scarecrow Jack (45) writes:

The thought, for me, was of old memories lost behind the dusty-drab everydayness of life. By all means, take from it what you want, it is the greatest compliment for me.

On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, Unforgotten (156) writes:

The flashes of information were quite enticing.. brilliant

On Tuesday August 7th, 2007, Army Barbie (500) writes:

I hate 0300 phone calls. Just so you know.

On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, Scarecrow Jack (45) writes:

Me too...I only get them when something is hideously wrong.

On Tuesday August 7th, 2007, urbanhumility (1348) writes:

so much left out........but so telling in a subjective way............well done

On Tuesday August 7th, 2007, Mab (1028) writes:

once again, this was executed with point blank perfection.

On Tuesday August 7th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

3 a.m. phone calls. I love it

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