DarkPoetry -|- pushblood -|- shE blEEds frOm hEr EyEs

shE blEEds frOm hEr EyEs

shE blEEds frOm hEr EyEs.
cArrIOn tEArs frOm A lIfEtImE of lIEs.
shE cArEssEs thE sAdIstIc MIstEr...
And whEn shE lEAvEs
shE lEAvEs In A hEArt bEAt Of tImE.
hE wOUld nEvEr rEAlly mIss hEr...

!!!thIs shE knEw In hEr mInd!!!

shE blEEds frOm hEr EyEs.
sUffEr wIthIn frOm A lIfEtImE Of lIEs.
cOnscIOUs drIftEd frEE fOr sO lOng.
nOw thE tAblEs hAvE tUrnEd,
And shE sEEs nOw thE wrOng.
hEArts shE hAs brOkEn, sOUls thAt shE stOlE.
It's All cOmIng bAck nOw, mIsEry lUrks dOwn thE hAll.

shE blEEds frOm hEr EyEs.
EmO vAmprEss brEAthEd A lIfEtImE Of lIEs.
lOOkIng At thIs wOmAn AftEr bEIng strUck.
I wAntEd tO hElp hEr, I wAnt tO hOld hEr.
BUt sOmEthIng InsIdE sAys

                      ?
                  ? ? ?
" why shOUld I gIvE A fUck!?!!"
                  ? ? ?
                      ?

I tOO wAs tOrmEntEd And lEt dOwn
by thIs wOmAn wIth blEEdIng EyEs.

WHaT?

OnE mOrE chAncE?

cOndOnE thE wrOng?

MAkE hEr fEEl As thOUgh hEr lIfEtImE Of lIEs
hAvE cOmE In thE rIght?
I'll dO It for hEr,
fOr hEr,
.I'll fIght.

shE blEEds frOm hEr EyEs.

As I fEEd hEr A lIfEtImE Of lIEs...
And thAt wAs thE dAy whEn...

..I blEd frOm mInE..

written in cooperation with tangeled (thank you)

sorry about A,E,I,O, & U it was meant to cause a feeling of frustration thru the poem.

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On Wednesday June 18th, 2008, chococat_122 (29) writes:

loved the poem, and yes, definately frustrating!

On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, Lost_And_Never_Found (9) writes:

I Am sO In lOvE wIth thIs pOEm...

On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, tangeled (556) writes:

thank you. ~ta~

On Saturday April 12th, 2008, Miss Mars (380) writes:

reading this was enjoyable. reminds me of someone. tho i can't place who really.... good write. -mars

On Friday April 11th, 2008, deadrosesrdust (142) writes:

i enjoyed reading this. the capitalization of vowels meaning to cause frustration did its job. but that aside i trully like it and the feeling it gives.

On Tuesday April 8th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2196) writes:

The last line tied this up nicely. I didn't the capitalization of all the vowels, though. That's one of my pet peeves.

On Tuesday April 8th, 2008, pushblood (37) writes:

Just finished editing. Thank you for the comment. The capitalization is also a pet peeve here, it was used to create a sense of frustration in the viewer. To make the poem feel more the way it was felt when written. Thank you again.

On Tuesday April 8th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2196) writes:

It really is a very vocal poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you for explaining the reason you felt the need to irk me. It was for a good cause. Much respect.

On Tuesday April 8th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2196) writes:

Another thing I liked about this is the fluidity. It flowed as one even voice. No echo. No break in the sea of words. Well done.

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