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Dark is my soul torn apart so often by the false love shown. The pain of non acceptance and the feeling of worthlessness beckons, and I accept with great enthusiasm. Married twice to pain and lies, thrown away by the ones I believed in. I accept the pain as I am in love with it, torn by my own self hatred and sense of nothingness, I attempt to die inside so I no longer feel, and I attempt to hurt to feel something real. Love mocks me and does not exist, the feeling companionship must not be for me. I myself create my misery, incompatible with anyone because of what I have become. I am an empty cup waiting to be filled, waiting to be loved waiting to be human once again, the thought is nice but not realistic. As I embrace my pain and remain weakly strong, you can gaze in my eyes and see my facade, but the me that I am you WILL NEVER SEE!




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First off this is my first poem ever. I don't mind positive criticism, it will only make me better. I have been married twice and as we all know love = pain. These are my feelings on the concept of being unloved, lonely, and cold because of it. Thank you all for taking the time to read it.




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On Wednesday August 8th, 2007, urbanhumility (1348) writes:
a tender and honest confession........a sad but beautiful introspection.........well done


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:
The real comment is this. This was allmost a rant. A freeflow poem as we know em. Keep these words true


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:
Into Dust is right. This is Emo realy Emo.. I envy you 2 broken relationships like that holds many poems.. Write em all and jump out the window.. or. get a thousand cats. or a tree log and talk strange


On Friday June 1st, 2007, An Expired Member (16) writes:
I relate to this poem alot. I love it.


On Wednesday May 30th, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:
This poem makes me feel content, and I relize more than just love is out there...


On Tuesday May 29th, 2007, An Expired Member (13) writes:
every time your in a relationship you want out, but when your alone you want some one there.... it's an unbroken cycle that never has meaning


On Tuesday May 29th, 2007, Evil (543) writes:
spell check.



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