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Dark Alleys and Broken Hearts

just a little feelings...

Come, I'll meet you in an alley that's dark.

I'd love to bleed you dry and watch your skin turn to marble.

Aren't you disgusted by how human you are?

Am I not? Stab me; strangle me; see for yourself.

If you're thinking I'm a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not.

Just kill me, kiss me, and see if I rot.

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On Tuesday April 29th, 2008, Choronzon (233) writes:

Sweet imagery.

On Monday April 7th, 2008, wilted (303) writes:

"I'd love to bleed you dry and watch your skin turn to marble." That's intense. The whole poem is, infact. Seems to end a little abruptly. I think it works, though, considering it jumps around throughout. Overall, nice work.

On Monday April 7th, 2008, Fantecstasy (93) writes:

Impressively done and dark, and all things be considered... I loved it a lot. Especially the ending, a nice touch of romantic doom. *tips hat*

On Monday April 7th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (486) writes:

Wow, *agrees with Sketso* A big welcome back, great piece...

On Monday April 7th, 2008, Sketso (543) writes:

...dare I say... a perfect answer. And yes, I am disgusted by how human I am. Welcome back from your hiatus, Jess.

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