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"Amongst the Flowers" by Rhys Ki

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I am no longer the forgiving kind,

For I let heartbreak make up my mind.

A nameless, roguish boy from the past

Will make sure that no other love will last.

I stand alone in a field of budding foliage.

They encircle my thoughts with their majestic

And splendid arrays of smells and scents

I am enveloped by its delicate prominence

This wonderfully crafted gift of nature has inspired

Songs...

Poetry…

And Love...

They gather so much adoration and veneration

With their marvelous pallet of luminous colors.

So, still alone, I give-in to contemplation;

Why has true love not found me among the flowers?




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On Thursday July 3rd, 2008, heroineyes (65) writes:
i think this one is my favorite...i love the last few lines...the image they present is gorgeous


On Tuesday April 29th, 2008, Choronzon (236) writes:
Keep faith in yourself despite the world.


On Monday October 22nd, 2007, Sketso (532) writes:
You are a rose in the midst of crabgrass, and don't you forget it! Thanks for sharing this ache...


On Tuesday September 25th, 2007, Grim_Sorrow (87) writes:
I love the image this work portrays... also, impressive in the fact that the subject matter is so easy to relate too. Who hasn't at one point pondered loves manifestation and when they too would feel its grasp. keep writing .


On Sunday September 9th, 2007, NapoleonsLust (24) writes:
if a beauty were standing in a field of flowers, whose to say that they are worthy to pick such a delicate flower?-NL


On Wednesday September 5th, 2007, Please Press Reset (186) writes:
good things come to those who wait, great things happen to those who just go for it. great write. =)


On Wednesday August 1st, 2007, Saint Ebb (81) writes:
that happens. Be well Ki.


On Wednesday August 1st, 2007, Saint Ebb (81) writes:
He is right. IF you are patient it should find you. In the meantime, figure out what you are really wanting and needing from this love, rather than figuring out after that what you thought you wanted is actually something very different. It's a bitch when


On Friday July 27th, 2007, Alanarchy (1627) writes:
Loved that first line. I think you won't have a problem finding true love. Just don't let the past rust you over. Good things take a while. great read.


On Friday July 27th, 2007, Rhys Ki (126) writes:
Thanks. It's greatly appreciated...



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