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"Unrequited Love"

To fall in love
Over
And over

Must hurt.

She falls for me
Every night

And I can't catch her

I wish I could
But al I can do
Is watch her fall

I hear her cry,
But, out of arms' reach,
I can't wipe the tears.

I wish I could,
I wish I could.

To love and let fall,
Is to live and let die,
Is to love and let live
In misery

My heart is torn,
Two pieces
500 miles apart.

It still beats...
It beats her,
It beats me,

Her tears
Are my blood
Staining the distance,

And I can't stop it

I wish I could,
I wish I could.

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On Friday March 14th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (377) writes:

*sighs once again* Like so many of my own works... I would commend you on your excellent use of emotion and description but I'm not going to because they just made reading this hurt more. :P (But very well done)

On Saturday June 30th, 2007, GothicBlack (278) writes:

I will not claim to know the circumstance, however i will say that love is such a beautiful thing yet it can grate on you like a whipping post. You captured it well and im sorry for any pain felt through love. I've been there. Kinda reminds me of my work.

On Saturday June 30th, 2007, GothicBlack (278) writes:

But much better i think. ~gothic~

On Monday June 25th, 2007, silent circus (400) writes:

u could to, she truely does.........beautifully written write......truely

On Monday June 25th, 2007, silent circus (400) writes:

it still tears me apart, to read, to know, it really does, im sure whoever you wrote this for, wishes not to shed tears, or to cause even the slightest pain for you , but wants you to be happier, she truely does love you, im sure of that.....she wishes yo

On Saturday June 23rd, 2007, Err0r (586) writes:

Music for the heart. I love it.

On Saturday June 23rd, 2007, SalemLex (45) writes:

Beautifully written.

On Saturday June 23rd, 2007, Buttons (146) writes:

This is beatiful "she falls for me everynight and i cant catch her" what truth this holds in many different ways for someone to apply to LIFE.. i loved reading this.. rach

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