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Bleed from me this sin
That in the pool I may drown
And be truly pure

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On Saturday June 2nd, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:

You're a better poet than I.

On Friday June 1st, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:

I'm a sucker for haiku ;)... good one!

On Thursday June 7th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Seconded! -Carl

On Friday June 1st, 2007, glasshouse (812) writes:

I'm not really into the whole Haiku thing, I gotta tell ya. Usually I find that they lack any depth or imagery or grasp but i must say, this brought a beautiful and haunting image to my mind and I am very impressed. Well done. -Jes

On Friday June 1st, 2007, unspeakable truth (154) writes:

Beautiful......

On Friday June 1st, 2007, saintedmad (995) writes:

based on this alone, i am favouritizing you....this just melts all over my soul; a redemption, a catachism of words. .. elega[u]nt. . . nessa

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