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What the Sun Couldn't Kiss

Her heart is burning
in front of a visible trojan
and she'll touch the light she hadn't
meant to see.

I have been dreaming again,
of sunlight and moonsets
and even flows to
horoscopes
and water crystals in his hair.

The glow in his eye sockets
or eyes
is like a solar eclipse,
the blinding rays so previlant,
the sight so beautiful,
so maddening.

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On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (275) writes:

beautiful images you give me with this great write:)

On Sunday September 2nd, 2007, Esau (284) writes:

this seemed bright, i had to look away. but then i had the dark circles in my vision casting a new view on things. what i'm seen though i don't know.

On Friday August 3rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l.

On Sunday June 10th, 2007, OttOEviL (90) writes:

I have to agree...You have an amazing perspective on things!!!

On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

unique imagery.. loved the ending line 'the sight so beautiful, so maddening'

On Saturday June 9th, 2007, Trigger (123) writes:

The imagery is extraordinary. Good write. -Saeth-

On Saturday June 9th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

"of sunlight and moonsets ..." The reason Helen's abduction by Paris brought about the War and fires in Troy is felt in the passion of this poem; a lament of the heart. As expressively vivid as a painting, "like a solar eclipse." Well done.

On Saturday June 9th, 2007, Anth (1571) writes:

this was different, very much so, almost enrapturing, really captured an intense and transient moment of beauty

On Friday June 8th, 2007, NikesRain (1422) writes:

definite intriguing images conjured with this....the second section i can't stop reading.....the last two lines are a perfect finish too...well done

On Friday June 8th, 2007, Silent_Poet (72) writes:

Interesting imagery makes for an even more interesting read.

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