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Even as the flow
of words
or oil
on a canvas
or notebook.

As seldomly inspired,
as deceptive,
as underappreciated.

The music between floor boards
and what my closets
bury
is buried in the pages
of your poem
and the shading
of your textured forest.
The perfect pitch.

Temples beating,
foreheads glistening.
I block light
as you block time,
or would.

And in the aisle of my project,
my legacy,
I, too, close my eyes
and ponder what devastation my hands
will bring into the world
of artists and psychopaths.



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On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, edenscancer (50) writes:
your work makes my heart stop. out of few writers on this site you have given lesser poets the right to say "I have played where god's fucked".


On Friday June 8th, 2007, dying angel (1310) writes:
"is buried in the pages of your poem and the shading of your textured forest" you have the most beautiful way of twisting words and turning them into such haunting images. you stay with me long after i click away from your page.


On Thursday June 7th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (382) writes:
Hmm, this reminds me of the positive correlation between creativity and intelligence. This thought left a wonderful implication to your ending. ~T


On Thursday June 7th, 2007, urbanhumility (1369) writes:
articulate and revealing your words deliver......so much...........urban


On Thursday June 7th, 2007, Preacher X (59) writes:
Very nice form, as carl said good flow and language. I especially like the line breaks to emphasize certain phrases. Very good allusion and analog between artists and psychopaths. History shows they tend to go together. *tries to loosen the straight


On Thursday June 7th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
Hehe..You know what I think of this but to reiterate, great flow and language. I felt this one, as any one who creates would. A stunner. -Carl


On Thursday June 7th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1106) writes:
all this lies in the power of fingers and individual thought patters.... i would bring chaos / love with my hands, if not a tofurkey sandwich :) you rock socks kiddo



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