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"October's Promise" by Lolita

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I remember the day october
looked into your eyes and promised
november would be prettier this year
but on Halloween it snowed
and you forgot to let your dog in that night.

So with his frozen corpse, the outline of a snowbeast,
you curse the day you prayed to Autumn
and worship the spring, her enemy,
never forgetting that cold november morning
when october reached beneath your ribcage
and took your trust away.



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On Tuesday August 12th, 2008, edenscancer (46) writes:
I loved when you gave October a soul, and made it soulless


On Monday July 28th, 2008, Scarrzz (124) writes:
It blurs the line between poetry and reality. That was a vivid word picture that turned from beautiful to painful, and I hope it wasn't real.


On Monday August 27th, 2007, Please Press Reset (186) writes:
beautiful and original


On Friday June 8th, 2007, Army Barbie (501) writes:
You are fucking amazing cory


On Saturday May 19th, 2007, capt_funguy (1000) writes:
original thought conveyed in an original fashion- with a chinese thesaurus i couldn't come up with enough wordage to praise this piece enough - blown away by it's perfect simplicity .... funguy


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Alanarchy (1627) writes:
Fucking stellar write. BU nailed it.


On Monday May 14th, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:
Outstanding, the title caught my attention. This proves flawless


On Friday May 4th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
"but on Halloween it snowed" Goodness this is a powerful, poignant, vivid poem. It is absolutely beautiful... you've captured the essence of the season and more wonderfully. Very well done.


On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, dying angel (1351) writes:
i've missed you! i'm glad you're back


On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1155) writes:
for some reason, there seemed to be alittle flavor of alkaline trio in here (a style of which i adore), write on sista, write on :)



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