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Sometimes I try to
keep you down just to
keep you around
'cause as soon as...
as soon as...


Sometimes I look up at you and I see
so much more than one person could be,
but it's
beautiful in its rarity,
and although the world would benefit from you,
I wanna keep you for me


So sometimes I
pretend to cry so that you rush to my side
and I can look into your eyes
and fight back that smile
that I wanna smile
because of the
tranquility that comes over me
when I know that you love me.


And sometimes I lie
when you ask what I feel about you
and what others think about you
and though that may be true
I know it's my fault,
for covering up the things that you do
or would do
if I would let you.

But sometimes you still get
that look on your face
that beautiful look
that I've grown to hate,
when you realize that you are something
more than I give you credit for
and the question marks in your eyes
fall upon me like melting hot rubber
and I know to look away because you know
I can't lie when you give me that eye.

So sometimes I
try to keep you down
just to
keep you around
'cause as soon as you learn how amazing you are
You're gonna leave me.



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On Wednesday March 26th, 2008, Mab (1052) writes:
I've read this many times and I still don't have the right words.I think it's flawless and melodious and I loves it!The title reminded me of Joplin, so naturally I pictured her crooning this while strumming on a guitar..lol :)


On Thursday February 21st, 2008, tangeled (542) writes:
like a song, i couldn't help but sing it. brutal honesty. two pens up!


On Thursday February 21st, 2008, Saint Ebb (85) writes:
yeah....pretty sad how things work...


On Wednesday February 20th, 2008, Bella Butchery (1162) writes:
too sad


On Wednesday February 20th, 2008, lajeeves (62) writes:
I think you have just given me insite into what is going through the mind of my girlfriend. THANKS.


On Tuesday January 29th, 2008, An Expired Member (15) writes:
I dont know what i can say about that one, other than it was wonderful


On Wednesday January 23rd, 2008, Fantecstasy (80) writes:
Very beautiful, love the flow and beat. I wish I could come up with more words to say how awesome it was but... I can't think of any, just know it was good! *tips hat*


On Sunday January 20th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (367) writes:
Wow... that was a beautiful poem, and I love romantic works... Another for the favorites list. Well done.


On Sunday January 20th, 2008, Lolita (115) writes:
Thanks, man. It means a lot.



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