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the weather outside my window

The skies rumble;
dark clouds mocking my mood
as a million and three raindrops
flee the scene.

I could swear I saw lightning
flashing in her eyes,
but I'm not grounded...

I felt no fear.

Free-fall
with a million and two friends
wouldn't be so bad...
sharing dreams with screams
without the realization
of impending doom

until you...

H
I
T

Excuse me, Lord...
must be some.thing wrong.
I bought a ticket for the ocean...

not this puddle.

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On Monday June 23rd, 2008, After hours (570) writes:

Piggybacks nEssA's comment, the whole deal drenched me but the finale was outstanding...yet I must say i have... on occasion, found drinking from a small puddle has eventuated into an ocean, i think some things are simply meant to appear small so's we're not overwhelmed by their potential...gr8 write

On Monday August 11th, 2008, saintedmad (1183) writes:

goodness, arent you clever? 'so we're not overwhelmed by their potential'......gawds!!!!------

On Thursday June 19th, 2008, Narcissa (681) writes:

I love the ending as well. I Agree w/Tangle...I think I hit a stick... there are always splinters I'm trying to remove...*hands over parachute*...I don't think Ill need it.

On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, saintedmad (1183) writes:

i just love honest words. a haunted ref.rain of a man; as art; imitating life. .. .something in which the looking glass seems all too real, or more real, surreal. . .. perfection of an ending. .. .ness.

On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, Mab (995) writes:

sometimes those puddles of dejection are deep enough to drown in...wonderful write,skets.

On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, AdrianJ (50) writes:

Haha - I like the cruel irony of it all. The camaraderie until the end where individuality rears its curious idea...

On Tuesday June 17th, 2008, MindRape (872) writes:

but you don't have any control over the ride....including where you get off. You thought you bought a ticket for the ocean....all you really did was hitch a ride

On Monday June 16th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (506) writes:

You'll get your chance again when the sun comes up, the evaporation process might sting a little, but soon you're on your feet (or in a cloud) and you can aim for that ocean again. I love the ideas in this, *raises glass* Here's to the storm subsiding

On Monday June 16th, 2008, tangeled (506) writes:

stunning as always. i bought a ticket for the ocean too... at least you got a puddle. great write!! ~ta~

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