You have a way of making a line drop like a bombshell, and I love it.

ive heard this before in diffrent wording "i love her and when she comes up to me and asks whos life do you care about more mine or yours id have to say mine even though she'd get mad because little does she know she is my life." or something like that :) nice right i like poems like this *KEEPIN IT ON THE POSITIVE SIDE :D* -jake

Damn this is such a bad ass write!!!

You're the shape shifter of broken hearts, very well done sketso.

this was painful... a reaching, aching... grasping then like rejecting and slapping away... just how it felt to me... well worded and effective

"You can love me when I'm gone."..Can I use that line? This cuts through a few layers for me...How do you do that?

I just write out of growing agony, kellz. And you know you can use any line you want.

its another wonderful write brother, another one i feel -symph-

i really like this! Really like it. And thank you for the new word to add to my collection!

Yes, disparition is similar in appearance to desperation, which is why I chose it. There is, however, a much deeper meaning to the word than the simple "desparation" which once filled its spot. It is not a misspelling, but rather an intentional implication with a bit of misdirection.

Ok, ok, after being questioned about the validity of the word "disparition", it's French, and can be literally translated to mean "extinction". I used it to purposefully tie together the direct meaning of the French "extinction" right along with "disparity" and "desperation". All fit, yet none were quite right on their own.