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Yet another petal in that damn daisy chain...

I love me...
I love me not...
I just can't stand
to settle.
Plucking petals
when all the others are gone.
pluck.
pluck..
pluck...
so many more,
pluck....
pluck.....
pluck......
I seem to have
so much to give.
Each tiny petal
and you just can't see;
I'm dandy,
no lyin'!

pretending to be a daisy...

until I'm blown away.

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On Sunday September 23rd, 2007, Narcissa (630) writes:

Daisys are over rated! We make wishes on dandelions

On Sunday September 23rd, 2007, Aunty Depressant (752) writes:

Is cute..but frightening in a way. I agree with Z, but also see not just introspect, but a blind sense of invincibility leading to demise here...attention seeking?Weed like to know more :P

On Saturday September 22nd, 2007, Army Barbie (499) writes:

"I'm dandy, No lyin! Pretending to be a daisy..." So it's not a reason to smile, but it made me smile. The simple ingenuity of it.

On Saturday September 22nd, 2007, Sketso (343) writes:

So someone DID see it... ;)

On Saturday September 22nd, 2007, dying angel (1423) writes:

i like the idea behind this. it made me picture the daisy being plucked in search for answers. don't question yourself too much...like you said you'll just blow away. great write.

On Saturday September 22nd, 2007, sol (7) writes:

this is great.

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