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(this was written for my mother. its supposed to be for her unrequitted love *did i spell that right* any way she broke into tears and told me thats exactly how she feels.. just meant a little something to me)














"Another Old Time"


feelings stay, and seem to grow
even as memories get old
still i see that fire there
in your eyes, you really care

withered thoughts, and darkened mind
i've tried to leave it all behind
but, here you lurk within my heart
filling and tearing it apart

and i see your angel face
deep inside, makes my heart race
here you are within my mind
i feel you there all the damned time

i want to give up all these thoughts
our memories have begun to rot
and it's been so long, yet i still see
apart of you, inside of me



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On Friday June 15th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (461) writes:
also did i use "begun" right... it just doesnt sound right... :)


On Friday June 15th, 2007, Ainsof (1866) writes:
begun's all good... I believe that's the present perfect, if that's the temporal relation you want...but you might consider 'a part' instead of 'apart'... very touching, melancholic, sincere...



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