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Entwined Symphony

I find you here, deep inside
always
there
hearing my mind
in my eyes, you see my pain
in my mind, you hear insane

do you feel me
i feel you
will you hurt me

tell the truth

in my hands
i feel your face
in your breath
i hear a race
do you see into my soul
it will never let you go

look upon my broken heart
multiple times
torn apart
see into
my plotting mind
what we all
should leave behind

save me,
love,
then take my hand
and we'll go to
another land

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On Friday April 18th, 2008, iosage (37) writes:

/in my eyes, you see my pain in my mind, you hear insane/ ~lovely. >:)

On Wednesday July 11th, 2007, ReddropX (46) writes:

I feel this.

On Saturday July 7th, 2007, me_the_messenger (174) writes:

felt it... too many times. wow i love ur writing so much, ur amazing! *messenger

On Thursday June 14th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (409) writes:

thanks ;) and you pretty much got it preacher ;)

On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Preacher X (60) writes:

I enjoyed this alot. The title doesn't really fit as you said but it is not bad either.

On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Preacher X (60) writes:

Seems more like a matter of a shattered innocence, or lack of trust type thing then a dark soul. She wants to love, but fears it. She wants to trust but has trouble.

On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Preacher X (60) writes:

In the end though, she wants salvation and to live happy. At least that's what i gathered.

On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, Alanarchy (1606) writes:

I thought the title fit, but if you want some suggestions.... maybe "See Inside" Title or no, I did enjoy the write. Nice work.

On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, silent circus (400) writes:

awe................need to get away....love it, another good write ~*danni*~

On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, OttOEviL (98) writes:

Awsome luv.....I enjoyed this alot!!! =]

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