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today

i was laying there
my back facing you
tears falling
while you were getting dressed

i thought that maybe
you would sense my pain
and resentment
but instead

you finished dressing
and
walked away

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On Friday June 13th, 2008, An Expired Member (17) writes:

OUCH...

On Thursday October 25th, 2007, Zen (623) writes:

sons a bitches. they're all sons a bitches , you should fold your cards now. and have a nice day. :)

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, ReddropX (40) writes:

A heartbreaking moment well expressed. I love it.

On Thursday June 14th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (450) writes:

thank you all :) and... i do say something, thats just the moment before i get out of bed and ask why he's being a dick ;) i dont have a bad guy, its just one of those moments ;)

On Wednesday June 13th, 2007, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

whew. this hits hard but in a way that's heavy, not sharp or biting. well done.

On Monday June 11th, 2007, Enigma (126) writes:

How sad. I hope it never happens to you again. " or like Nuri said, you should say something, Speak your mind " Nice write.

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:

Short Bitter And Sweet

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, thelostmessenger (196) writes:

it happens... and yes im back! yay i was almost deleted when i sent in my postcard so im back for good... again, nice write. *messenger

On Wednesday May 23rd, 2007, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

I hate when that happens.

On Sunday June 3rd, 2007, ShardsofSilence (329) writes:

Indeed..

On Monday May 21st, 2007, unspeakable truth (146) writes:

Our voice can end pain, as our mind sometimes allows it to much free reign. What saddness....

On Monday May 21st, 2007, DarkDruidess (203) writes:

ouch painfully sad....I know this...

On Monday May 21st, 2007, Nuri (192) writes:

Sometimes you think that your emotions are so strong, it radiates and touch others but most times, you have to say something in order to be felt. You should say something.

On Monday May 21st, 2007, A cold world (55) writes:

Beautiful and yet truthful people only care about how they feel and look that they don't care how much pain they caused us

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