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okay, i know youre all gonaa think im crazy but everyone does when i tell this story.
when i was about ten. me, my mom and little brother and sis were riding around german town on our way to see my granfathers grave, when this young looking guy flagged us down and asked for a cigg.
my mom, being as weird as she is, asked if he needed a ride. he took it, id ont know where he was goin'.
so, we went to white castle, and a few other places, just riding around and they were chatting, he was extremely nice. very young, in his mid to late twenties, i remember he was dressed in a plaid shirt and faded jeans. he had these eyes. that i cant really explain, i havent seen any like them since, it was like they shone right through you. i couldnt ever really describe them.
his name was jayden.
well, after a couple hours we stopped to get some flowers for my grandpas grave.
my family all went in and i was left alone with him in the car, we sat for about ten minutes, i dnt remember what was said. but they were taking a while so i went in to see what was taking so long. when i shut the door and looked back he wasnt there any more. literally within seconds.
i truly believe he was something not of this world, some kind of angelic being. i know it sounds totally insane but i saw it and ive never forgotten his eyes, the warmth and happiness of this strangers presence, it was one of the most peaceeful times of my hectic life.
believe it or not.
but i do.



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On Monday June 11th, 2007, Enigma (126) writes:
I would belive it, I've had similar instances like that one. some with good feelings some with bad. But I don't think your crazy.


On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, thelostmessenger (177) writes:
your so not insane. i've been contacted once or twice by something not of this plane, or world, or dimension or whatever. i truely believe u. great story.


On Tuesday June 5th, 2007, blue (1751) writes:
I believe it. ~b


On Tuesday June 5th, 2007, Mab (1028) writes:
No, you're not crazy..I'm glad it was a pleasant experience for you :)


On Friday May 18th, 2007, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:
A comforting memory such as that...should be held tight and never dirtied...for any reason.



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