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melody

midnight skies caress the moon
she sighs
a loving fateful swoon
stars blink shyly in the night
clouds stretch
azily cross the sky
rain falls light as you say good bye

tears collide
with broken thoughts
your blood

covers
memories id forgot
i see your eyes that gleam
cold death

i know in you
theres nothing left

the moon weeps
softly
for your soul

i pray

youll never let me go

and the night
envelopes
our love

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On Wednesday July 25th, 2007, i tremble (42) writes:

I like the last two lines best.

On Tuesday June 19th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (396) writes:

Nice title to sum up a rather nice entry! Despite the rhyme it had a nice shaded feel to it! Nice Write!

On Friday June 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:

good creating of mind-images:)

On Monday June 11th, 2007, Enigma (126) writes:

i could picture it every word. Sweet poem.

On Thursday May 10th, 2007, wilted (299) writes:

Short, sweet, and well written. Some of the images in here were really strong... nice work.

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