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Tonight, we sleep....

Take me away tonight...
Let's escape to the dream that was ours to begin with
Where flames could not burn and thorns could not pierce through our skin

Take me away tonight...
While the world is in deep slumber like new born babies
while the stars are dancing like flirting fireflies

Make it tonight...
When windchimes tickle my ears like dandelions court the wind
(I would like to remember the world this way)

Let us take flight...
Dig our angel wings from the dirt where we shall sleep forever
Use them this one last time....

Please....

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On Sunday August 19th, 2007, totaltrip (48) writes:

i'm in love. with this. *sigh* right back at you.

On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (681) writes:

Damn you should really give me some pointers on how to do this, this left me in awe from begining to end evry time i read it, you just keep kicking my ass with your lovely poetry skarlet -symph-

On Friday May 11th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (256) writes:

do they??? i didn't know that. never again!

On Friday May 11th, 2007, dying angel (1344) writes:

actually, it depends how you look at it. sometimes that "..." adds to the poem. so if you like it as it is then keep it that way =)

On Friday May 11th, 2007, disc (82) writes:

I'm not sure what you're trying to do with the "..." trail at the end of those lines, but they really make your poem sound cheap.

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