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"Under the moonlight..." by Skarlet Rebell Queen

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On the night when April winds blew
The garden was my only solace,
my only peace

I took a walk a saw her....

There she was under the dogwood tree
Standing ever so still
Her hair swayed as if dancing with the cool night breeze
I dared not disturb her but she sensed my presence
knew I was there

The cold ran through me like a thousand knives
paralyzing me, I was petrified.
How dare I walk the grounds on which she stood?

I just waited...

I just waited...
for whatever punishment she thought I deserved
but instead she said,
"Do you know what I stand for? Do you know why I'm here?"

I blinked, words that I trusted for so long
betrayed me.
"Your bittersweet longing," she whispered, "is the same as my own."
"Longing for what?" Alas! I found my voice.

And then she looked up and vanished after she sighed,
"The Moon."



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On Monday July 28th, 2008, BetterOffDeadMoon (562) writes:
*mouth hits floor* ok three things pops out at me. first. that this is beautiful just like the auther *huggles* that april line. my birthdays in april. and that its ze moon both are after. this is gorgeous queen *sticks a lolly in your mouth.* ^_^


On Friday June 29th, 2007, NikesRain (1421) writes:
i thought it lovely...engaging visusals created and the ending leaving a space for contemplation or a chance to let the imagination wander...well done


On Sunday May 6th, 2007, A cold world (55) writes:
that's a good poem could use a little work buts its good. If you need any help with endings and stuff like that then just send me a message and I will be glad to help you but I have to say its really good and I like it.


On Sunday May 6th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (200) writes:
hihihih... yeah, the ending isn't that grand... i was thinking of a nice ending but that's all that came up...i'll definitely take you up on that offer...:) thanks...



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