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Symphony's Lullaby

i've arranged notes in my head
to try to make them
sound like your breaths
and the melody,
its highs and lows,
become in sync with
the heaving of your chest
and when you respire,
i am inspired
by the sound of you,
sleeping.

♥

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On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Narcissa (724) writes:

So Sweet - Sigh***

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, smearedXmakeup (23) writes:

to try to make them sound like your breaths Oh my. This was wonderful.

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:

That was beautiful.

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, darkdesires (189) writes:

Very nice piece... its so heartwarming.

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Alanarchy (1615) writes:

It doesn't get much prettier then this. I feel like I have to whisper.

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:

made me think of someone special to me, and brightened my day, thank you

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

This pattered wonderfully. A precious piece of poetry beautifully wrought. Btw..the 'it's' in the fourth line should be 'its', I think. Just in case :) -Carl

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (256) writes:

lol.. yeah, thanks for noticing..

On Thursday August 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Wanted it just perfect :)

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